Story Excerpts

Tuesday, September 27, 2011

Blog Button Design

I heard back from Tate Images this morning, and they said that I could use the image without the watermark and organizational info at http://www.artfund.org/artwork/1552/lady-altamont.  I'm not sure why this wasn't clear from the beginning, but yay!  I'm a happy camper now. 

Yesterday, I took a picture of an old music box and had a lot of fun creating another blog button.  Yeah, the watermark was annoying me.  I am too much of a perfectionist, but hey, it helps when your writing books.  I know...I'm spending way too much time on this.  But as a firm believer in that presentation is everything, I wanted to give it all I've got. :-)

So now that I can use the image without the watermark, I'm trying to decide which to go with.  Which of these blog buttons do you like best?  Thanks for sharing your opinon!

Sunday, September 25, 2011

Pardon My Editing

When I decided to blog "The Way of Impressions" as I write it, I did consider that I might come across interesting history that I would want to weave into my story, well after I had started it.  Well, it's happened, but don't freak out.  I'm not going to rearrange and rewrite the whole story.  It's a small historic detail that will easily fit into what I've already written.  Actually, it makes it better.

Photo by Rich Bowen
http://www.flickr.com/photos/rbowen/280524996/

Calling cards.  I had thought calling cards were more of a "Regency" and "Victorian" thing, but while researching on the Georgian era, I discovered that calling cards were in use as far back as the 1600s (although they weren't yet a social equiette norm in the late 1600s), and by the late 1700s, calling cards were a must.

So why draw attention to it, if its not going to change the story plot?  Well, I didn't want to frustrate those following my story with sudden new mentions of calling cards when I didn't start out with them.  I will go back to chapters 4 and 7 in my working draft and include mention of them, but I hesitate to do it on my blog, because again, I don't want to frustrate my readers.  On the other hand, I do want to give them the best picture of life in Georgian England that I can.

Another little thing I will have to change: I confirmed that regardless of class and title, sons and daughters addressed their parents as "Sir" and "Madam".

What do you think?  Too major of a change to go back and edit?  Should I just continue forward with the new information like I had been including it all along?

Friday, September 23, 2011

Louisa's Howe's Painting

Isn't this such a lovely painting of Louisa Howe?  (The heroine in my story "The Way of Impressions".)

I finally got permission from Tate Images in London, England to use the image on my blog.  They wouldn't let me use it on my facebook page, and directed me to copy the image that has their information on it. 

It's kind of a bummer, having "TATE IMAGES" right in the middle of the picture, but I suppose if I'm going to dot all my "i"s and cross all my "t"s in the copyright world, I'll have to deal with it if I want to use it.  Never mind that there are other images of this painting on the internet free of the distraction of "TATE IMAGES".

I asked to use it because I wanted it as a blog ad button, but now I'm thinking that having "The Way of Impressions" and "TATE IMAGES" is very distracting.  My OCD  and perfectionist tendancies can't handle it.

Any comments?  Suggestions?

Wednesday, September 21, 2011

I Am A Christian Mom


In the world we live in today, it's hard to cling to Christian standards.  Being a mom makes it that much harder.  My son, Micah, is only a year old.  So while I'm still looking forward to being embarrassed by oscar-award-winning tantrums in public, attacked with never-ending wishlists (you know, the kind that keep on rolling and rolling down the hall while you're still reading the first line), and being tried and found "guilty" of being too strict, I still have my work cut out for me in protecting his little eyes and ears.

Radio.  TV.  All kinds of spiritual junk bombards us from a hundred different directions.  And when your husband has different ideas of what should and shouldn't be allowed...  Well, you get my drift.  I'm learning to pick and choose my battles, and it isn't easy.  But.  I have committed to two daily practices that will make a difference, regardless.
1) I pray for my son daily.  Have you ever heard people say, "Ther ain't noboby that can pray like Mama"?  Well, it's true.
2) I read the Word of God to my son daily.  Both a children's Bible storybook, and the real deal.  He may not understand what I'm reading, but it will still feed his spirit (and broaden his vocabulary ;-)

Thoughts?  Suggestions?  What do you do to uphold Christian standards/values in your home?

http://riseaboveyourlimits.blogspot.com/2011/08/christian-blog-hop.html

The Modern Good Samaritan

This is one of my old blog posts from 2006.  I decided to keep it and give it a "makeover".  It has a great message.

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David opened the car door of our red Mustang, immediantly drawn to the crowd congregating on the front lawn of a house down the street.  What's strewn all over the lawn?  Someone's belongings?  Is the sheriff forcing someone out of their house?  Beep!  He hit the lock button on the car key and made his way up the sidewalk to the front porch of our house, continuing to glance back at the commotion.
"Hi, Babe," I called to him, hearing the front door shut.
"There's something going on down the street."
"What?"
"I don't know.  There's a bunch of people gathered on one of the neighbor's lawns.  I'm going to take Harlee for a walk and check it out.  Wanna come?"
"Sure."
As we approached the house, it became clear that someone's belongings were covering the front lawn.  People were picking through the mess and carting off furniture, dishes, decor, videos, books, etc.  David approached someone and asked what was going on.
"The man who lived here passed away and his son declined his belongings.  All this stuff is free for the taking."
David and I looked at each other.  David said, "You wanna look?"
"Sure."
So we joined the scavengers.  While looking through the mess, David found a brand new walker.
I looked at David, puzzled.  "Why would you want a walker?"
"There's a homeless man that wanders the streets downtown, close to where I work.  He uses a walker because he only has one leg, and his walker looks kind of beat up.  Do you think I should take this for him?"
"I'm sure the man would love that," I replied, proud of him for thinking of someone he didn't even know while rummaging through a lawn covered in free stuff.  I was certainly thinking of what I could find for myself!
David took the walker with him to work.  Sure enough, he saw the homeless man walking down the sidewalk that very night.  David grabbed the walker and hurried to catch up with him.
The man "Ze Ze", as he called himself, was delighted by the walker.  He talked to David for a long time.  The next night, he came by David's building to talk to him again.  And the next night.  And the next. 
On Sunday, our pastor talked about our duty to bring the lost into the church so that they can hear the Word preached to them.  David leaned over to me and whispered, "I'm going to invite my homeless friend to church next week."
And he did.  Ze Ze told David that he would consider it, then later came back and said that he would go to church with him the following Sunday. 



That Sunday was today.  We attracted a lot of stares, pulling up in our flashy red Mustang to the bench where the one-legged homeless man with a long white beard that would make Santa Claus envious was waiting.  We loaded Ze Ze's new walker into the trunk, helped him into the car, then took him to breakfast to kill time until the second service.  People in the restaurant stared at us as we talked, but Ze Ze didn't seem to care.  He rather seemed to be enjoying himself, and his plate of scrambled eggs.  He must be used to people staring, I thought to myself, feeling ashamed for our spectators.
When we walked into the church, people continued to notice Ze Ze, but greeted him with warm friendly smiles and handshakes.  David was worried that they might be offended by the way Ze Ze looked and smelled, but if they were, they didn't show it.  I watched him out of the corner of my eye as the service began and the music started, guessing that he had been expecting formal hymns instead of contemperary worship songs played by a band.  He stood and clapped his hands along with everyone else, and didn't seem uncomfortable.
Pastor gave the altar call at the end of the service, and Ze Ze said the sinner's prayer and invited Jesus into his life.
David leaned over and whispered to me, "I want to buy him a Bible, and some food and clothes."
I nodded, amazed again at how instead of feeling like he had done his part (like I would have), David was asking, "What else can I do, Lord?"

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Ze Ze is no longer homeless.  He has a job and a house, and God has blessed him.  Those of us who have "grown up" in the church can become so caught up in our background, seniority, theology degrees, etc., that we miss out on what God is wanting to do.  We need to follow David's example and keep the calluses off our hearts.  We need to train ourselves to think of others more often, and beware of getting used to seeing homeless people on the streets.

Tuesday, September 20, 2011

Liebster Blog Award!


A big THANK YOU to Author Karin Kaufman for awarding me the Liebster Blog Award!  Please scoot on over to her blog and check out her debut novel The Witch Tree, an Edgy Christian Mystery.

What is a Liebster Blog Award?  Well, I'll tell you.  Liebster, it turns out, is German for "dearest" (as in "Mein liebster, you make amazing strudel"), and the Liebster Award is given by fellow bloggers to blogs with a following of 200 (some say 300) or fewer people. Here’s how it works:
  • When you receive the award, thank the blogger who gave it to you and link back to them.
  • Copy and paste the award on your blog.
  • Choose three to five blogs that deserve a bigger following, give them the Liebster Award, and let them know you’ve done so by leaving a comment on their blog.
There are so many wonderful "small" (200 followers is small?) blogs out there that deserve bigger followings, but here are my five selections:
  • Suzanne Hartmann, for her blog "Write This Way", a wonderful, resourceful blog full of advice and tips for writers.  She's author of "The Race that Lies Before Us" coming from Oak Tara in 2012, a consulting editor for Port Yonder Press, and homeschooling mom!
  • Trish G. for her blog "trishgdesigns & reads", a fun blog about books, art and more.
  • Margaret Metz for her blog "Through the Fog".  She's a book blogger and a writer who enjoys all sorts of genres, and watch out - she's also an army veteran.
  • Cathy for her beautiful book blog "Thoughts on Books".  She's reads and reviews Christian Fiction, and she's got green thumb.
  • Rachel Ropper for her book blog "Thoughts from a Compulsive Reader".  She's from Great Britain and she's a thorough book reviewer who focuses on Christian Historical Ficiton, and Amish Romances.
Go forth and Liebster!

Saturday, September 17, 2011

A Book Review of "Heaven is for Real"


"Heaven is for Real" is a powerful testimony, well-written in a way that holds your interest and compels you to keep turning the pages.  I started the book Thursday night, and I finished it before lunchtime yesterday.  That never happens.  Every chapter moved me to tears.  Maybe because I'm a mom and I would simply die if anything EVER happened to my son.  I cannot imagine the horror of seeing my little boy on the brink of death in the hospital, and I admire Todd and Sonja Burpo's courage through it all.

First off, I couldn't find anything in Colton's story that seemed inaccurate to Scripture, but after a few day of thinking about it, a few things stood out:

1. Colton implied that his great-grandpa already had his new body. We know from 1 Thessalonians 4:16 and other scriptures that those who are in heaven with God are disembodied spirits, and will be until the rapture of the church.
2. In Revelation 1:13, Jesus is wearing a gold sash. Colton said that Jesus' sash was purple.
3. In Revelation 19:11, Jesus' horse is described as being white, not rainbow-colored as Colton had claimed.
4. In Revelation 21:21, the twelve gates of heaven are said to be made from a single pearl (one pearl per gate). Colton claimed that the gate he saw was gold with pearl on it.

A couple of other things made me go "huh?" For instance, Colton said that everyone in heaven has wings and lights above their heads. He described the Holy Spirit as being "kind of blue", and the battle of Armageddon as a war where only the men fought, and then with either bow and arrows or swords.

Colton described Jesus as having brown hair and "pretty eyes", and over the years his parents showed him various paintings of Jesus, asking if any of the paintings were close.  Colton always said "no", until they came across a painting called "Prince of Peace" by Akiane Kramarik.  Colton stared hard at the painting, then said, "Dad, that one's right".  The painting was done by an eight-year-old girl who also claimed to have visited heaven.  Here is the link to the painting.  http://www.artakiane.com/gallery.  (If the painting doesn't come up automatically, go to the list of images and click on "P" for "Prince of Peace".)  I do like this painting, because it portrays Jesus as I have always pictured him.  Mediterranean coloring, Jewish features, and with brown hair and piercing eyes. 

But the thing that concerns me is that Akiane has said, I don’t really belong to any religion. We used to go to all different kinds of churches. Now we have home church. It’s more like a conversation about religion, love and unity. The easiest way to say it is, ‘I belong to God.’ I accept all faiths.”  Her inspiration for the painting was a carpenter who showed up at her door. 

So I guess I'll give this book 3 stars because of the inaccuracies.  I did enjoy reading it.  It had me laughing one minute over the funny things kids say, and crying the next over the horror the Burpo family faced.  While this book could be very encouraging to those who have had near-death experiences, or lost loved ones, I wouldn't recommend it to someone who isn't well-versed in what the Bible teaches about heaven.

Friday, September 16, 2011

The Versatile Blogger Award



AWARD
Thank you, Loree Huebner!  I appreciate your warm friendship, helpful encouragement and consistent support.
After you finish reading this post, check out what's happening at Loree's blog: Between you, me and the gatepost...
There are rules to this award...
     1. Thank and link back to the person who gave you the award.
     2. Share seven things about yourself on the post.
     3. Pass the award to fifteen bloggers that you think deserve it.
     4. Lastly, contact all of the bloggers that you've picked for the award.
In no particular order, I hereby bequeath "The Versatile Blogger Award" to:
1.     Karin Kaufman
2.     Doorkeeper
4.     Sheri Salatin
5.     Mom's Pace
7.     All-on Writing
8.     Amanda Stephan
9.     Austenitis

Okay, seven things about me.
1.     I lived in Hungary, Indonesia, and the Philippines as a teenager.
2.     I love rocking chairs.
3.     I am a not a good driver.  God's angels have their work cut out for them when I'm on the road.  LOL.
4.     I love to cook, and I'm always looking for new and delicious recipes to try :-)
5.     I can play the piano and a little guitar.
6.     I went to Bible college and majored in theology.
7.     My favorite chocolate candy is Brookside's Dark Chocolate Pomegranate.  If you haven't tried them, you must.

Monday, September 12, 2011

The Parallels between Ancient Israel and America Today

My friend called me this afternoon, and asked me to go to Sid Roth's website and watch a video of an interview with Messianic Rabbi Johnathan Cahn.  I'm so glad I did.  It raises alarm and a lot of questions.  I didn't know that our government and nation had its beginnings at the corner of Ground Zero!  Could America's rebellion against God lead to the same degree of judgement Israel suffered?

http://www.sidroth.org/site/News2?abbr=tv_&page=NewsArticle&id=10457

The link is to part one of the interview.  If you're interested in watching the second part, it will be aired by Sid Roth's show, "It's Supernatural" on TBN, Monday, September 26th.

Sunday, September 11, 2011

9/11: We Will Never Forget

Ten years ago, I was twenty-one, in class at Bible college.  Dr. Larry Hill got up during chapel and announced the attack on the world trade center.  Gasps.  Shock reverberated around the room.  Then Dr. Hill led us all in a corporate prayer for the victims, for their families, for our president and for our country.

It was a tragic day, and ten years later, my heart still goes out to the families of those who were lost.  I love this picture of the cross beams that were left standing in the ruins.  It effectively symbolizes the hope of the cross in the midst of tragedy and chaos.  It reminds us that God knows, He's in control, and He's right there beside us through it all.  Yes, in our fallen world, terrible things happen.  And while we know that God is capable of preventing catastrophe, we don't understand when He doesn't prevent it.  Our misunderstanding of God doesn't change Him.  He is still God, and He is still Good.

One day, there will be no more death.  No more disease.  No more crying and sadness.  No more evil.  I'm really looking forward to that day.  How about you?

Saturday, September 10, 2011

Creating Sympathy (and Maybe Even Affection) For Frustrating Characters

As a writer, I read a lot of book reviews to learn what readers didn't like about the books they read.  One thing that is contantly brought up is "rough around the edges" or frustrating characters with no redeeming qualities.  "I had no sympathy toward this character" or "I struggled to keep reading this book".  I read it over and over.  In Christian fiction, when a writer creates such a character, it is usually to show progressive character and spiritual growth.  I like to write about these characters too, so I know where the writer is coming from, and I cringe for them when I read unflattering reviews about their hard work.

So how can a writer create a frustrating character with redeeming, even likeable qualities?  What would that character look like?  Well, I am attempting to show it through my character "Louisa Howe" in my WIP "The Way of Impressions".

Louisa is a strong-minded teenager.  Her father has been away from home years at a time, being a war-time admiral in the Royal Navy.  Her mother is too occupied with her friends and social events to give Louisa the time she craves.  (It was common for eighteenth-century moms and dads to have distant relationships with their children due to high child-mortality rates.)  So naturally, Louisa is bent toward trouble.  She falls for a handsome navy captain, and when the captain confesses his love for her, she schemes for a way to become his wife.  She rebels against her father's wishes for her to marry an Irish earl, willing to deceive and trample the hearts of everyone who gets in her way. 

Yeah, who would be sympathic toward someone who is willing to lie and trample on people's hearts?  Well, one way I have attempted to create sympathy toward her is by revealing her beloved captain to be a spy who cares nothing for her.  That immediately brings the reader's attention to the devastation she will feel when she finds out the truth.  Another way is by giving her a conscience.  She feels guilt and regret as she lies and deceives.  She prays for God to forgive her.  That gives her a more human element.  And, she's starting to notice the earl.  That also gives the reader a reason to forgive her - while she may be willing to deceive him, she will eventually see the light and realize she loves him and not the captain. 

As for encouraging affection toward Louisa, I attempt it through humor.  In the scene where Lord Howe asks Louisa to play the piano for the earl, she plays and sings horribly on purpose, hoping to scare the earl away.  Also, at dinner, she commits the unpardonable sin and slurps her soup.  I also give her emotions, values, problems and hobbies that can be appreciated by a teenage girl in today's world.  She's modest.  She gets embarrassed.  She has to deal with gossip and jealous peers.  She loves to read books.  She loves animals. 

So...any thoughts or suggestions?  Anyone following my story brave enough to say, "sorry, none of your attempts to make me feel for Louisa have worked", lol!  Hey, I'm open to criticism.  Not that I like it, but I see it as a way to learn and become a better writer.

Friday, September 9, 2011

Beginning Ramblings

So I did it.  I decided to start a real blog.  *Deep breath*  I'm kind of nervous about it.  I mean, sure I can write stories, but would people want to hear me write about anything else?  LOL.  I guess I'll find out. 

I do have a motivation.  I'm torn in my desire to participate in blog hop posts, writing contests, book reviews and blog promotions, and my desire to keep my story blog "The Way of Impressions" unbroken in chapter sequence.  So this blog should give me the freedom to do other things besides write on my WIP, which I will continue and finish.  (I promise.)

Do you like my blog template?  A couple of my other blog friends have cool templates from scrappinblogs.blogspot.com/ and I decided to jump on the bandwagon.  I'm so bad.  I could spend so much time scrolling through blog templates.  :-)

Anyway, so welcome to much ado about Gwen's world.  I hope that through this blog I may inspire you, encourage you, challenge you, and entertain you.  Maybe even make you laugh.

"May the Lord bless you and protect you.  May the Lord smile on you and be gracious to you.  May the Lord show you his favor and give you his peace."  Numbers 6: 24-26  NLT 

I heard this verse spoken the other day in Hebrew, and it was absolutely beautiful.  How awesome it would be to be able to study the Bible in the original Hebrew and Greek!  As I listened, I couldn't help but wonder, what kind of language will we speak during the Millennial Reign of Christ?  Hmmm...  Worth thinking about.